Christmas Day

Name: Sini 16 November 2017

Success Criteria:

I must proofread after writing.

I must put the punctuation in the correct place.

Use figurative language, e.g Onomatopoeia.

Using strong or expensive vocabulary

It was December the 24th and everyone was helping each other getting all the decorations sorted. Also kids were rolling huge, medium, small snowballs around because they were making the body of the snowman. Kids couldn’t stop running because they were so excited for Christmas.

After an hour a gang of polar bears appeared out in the middle of the neighbourhood. There gang was called the Destroying gang. As soon as they appeared the scattered around the neighbours cracking all the Ornaments and the decorations. Then they all disappeared in a group, but luckily they didn’t destroy the presents. Most of the snowman's did not know what to do but just clean. Everyone was cleaning but nobody was complaining which is the good thing.KIds were also helping but they helped the old people.

After cleaning most of the kids went to sleep, while their parents was wrapping the presents. It was the next day which is 25th December, kids started ripping there presents open with excitement.