Christmas Day

Name: Sini 16 November 2017

Success Criteria:

I must proofread after writing.

I must put the punctuation in the correct place.

Use figurative language, e.g Onomatopoeia.

Using strong or expensive vocabulary

It was December the 24th and everyone was helping each other getting all the decorations sorted. Also kids were rolling huge, medium, small snowballs around because they were making the body of the snowman. Kids couldn’t stop running because they were so excited for Christmas.

After an hour a gang of polar bears appeared out in the middle of the neighbourhood. There gang was called the Destroying gang. As soon as they appeared the scattered around the neighbours cracking all the Ornaments and the decorations. Then they all disappeared in a group, but luckily they didn’t destroy the presents. Most of the snowman's did not know what to do but just clean. Everyone was cleaning but nobody was complaining which is the good thing.KIds were also helping but they helped the old people.

After cleaning most of the kids went to sleep, while their parents was wrapping the presents. It was the next day which is 25th December, kids started ripping there presents open with excitement.

Stripgenerator: Mode (Maths)

For today I got onto a site called Stripgenerator, Stripgenerator is a site where you create comic things, My comic was based on Maths and on Maths I was teaching others about Mode.

Descriptive: Using Sensory Language

Name: Sini 6 November 2017

Sight:

• Golden Sun Reflecting Into The Water
• Stillness of The Bird

Sound:

• Whine of The Engine
• Rhythm or The Blades
• The Snow Whistling In The Wind

Touch:

• Snow
• Biting Cold of The Snow Felt Like Burn on My Skin

Taste:

• The Saltiness of The Cheese
• The Earthy Mushroom
• The Tang of The Tomato Sauce

Smell:

• The Wet Salty Air
• Hints of Coconut Suntan Oil
• The Fishy Scent of Seaweed Baking of The Sun

WALHT - To Write a Descriptive

Success Criteria:

I must use my 5 senses

I must include adjective

I must use figurative language

Fireworks:

Sight:	Hear:	Smell:	Feel:	Taste:
Sparkling Light Patterns	Exploding Screaming Whistle	Gunpowder	Excitement Thrill Heat	Smoke

Bang! As the firework rushes to the sky getting ready to explode. I could people screaming with excitement as the firework explode with many different kind of patterns. When the fireworks were booming in the sky people could smell the smoke and the gunpowder. When people are were thrilled they could also taste the smoke coming into their mouth.

Pets Sense Danger

Name: Sini 24 October 2017

I as a owner looking after a pet is easy because it is my responsibility to feed and get my pet to sleep. As you know pets are playful but everyone knows that cats aren’t playful, they are lazier than dogs. But also cats can sense danger with their nose, they have cells in their nose that are sensitive to sense danger.