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Thursday 16 March 2017

Room 7 Paragraph

Name: Sini 14 March 2017

Success Criteria:
  • A Topic Sentence
  • Include Details (Why, When, Where, What, Who, How)
  • A Cluding Sentence
  • Check For Capitals, Punctuation and Spelling
  • Reread My Work To Make Sure It Makes Sense

Room 7 Paragraph

Room 7 has been having problem with the window sill. When it’s the eating bell you will see most of the students sitting and eating on the window, but if they break it they will have to pay for it. Actually some people will pay for it and most people won’t. The problem with room 7 is that they do not listen when our techer tells them to get off the window sill. When our pricipal walks into our class room, you will see them running back to their desk pretending they werren’t sitting on the window. Now tons of us students has been sitting on the window sill.

Keys:
Topic Sentence
Detail Sentence

Concluding Sentence

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